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New loves and old wounds

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New loves and old wounds
By Timothy Bettencourt

Ponyville-Twilight's library-late afternoon
We see Twilight Sparkle in her usual routine of organization.
TS: -and the encyclopedia of arcane items goes here, and.....done. You get that Spike?
Spike: Yep!
Twilight's assistant, Spike, quickly checks off an item from a comically long list.
TS: That takes care of the last new volumes to add to the library.
Spike(excited): So are we all done for the day?
Twilight looked at Spike bouncing hopefully, feeling slightly worried for her assistant, knowing exactly what he intended to do with free time.
TS(resigned): Yes Spike, we're done.
With that, Spike quickly dashed up stairs and quickly went to work preparing himself for a fine night out. He had on a sharp looking tuxedo complete with hat and cane and happily skipped down the stairs and presented himself before Twilight.
Spike: So whadda ya think? Not to bad if I say so myself.
TS: You look wonderful spike, but don't you think you should give it a rest for a bit?
Spike: Hey, you always told me perseverance is a virtue. Besides, (spike begins to have a dreamy look) any amount of work and waiting'll be worth it.
Spike looked smitten while Twilight watched, feeling empathetic for her assistant, hoping he wouldn't put himself in a point where he could get hurt.
TS: Alright, but try not to be out to late Spike.
Spike: (muttered)Heheh, all goes well, I might not come back at all...
Twilight looked at Spike with a stern look and he backed away slightly and held up his hands in defense.
Spike: Okay, okay, 9:30 curfew as usual.
He turned and opened the door with a little hop in his step.
Spike: Wish me luck!
With that, he left, Twilight still concerned for him.
TS: Rarity, please don't hurt him...
Ponyville-market-early evening
Spike was happily walking through town, enjoying the late day passing the last of the market goers on his way. All of them noticed his sharp dress and complimented him such which he proudly thanked them for. Some mares were even giving him catcalls and lightly flirting with him, to which he only gave a polite nod to. While there were plenty of lovely ladies in Ponyville, none of them had ever pulled his gaze away from Rarity. He was determined to win her over, he truly felt if he was to be with anyone, it would be her. Along his way Fluttershy was purchasing some things for her animals.
FLUTTERSHY: Thank you so much. Goodbye.
CLERK: See you later kiddo.
Fluttershy was about to head home when she spotted Spike, and she caught her breath.
FLUTTERSHY: Oh my!
She couldn't help but admire how handsome he looked when he dressed up. Since she first met him, she enjoyed very much speaking to him and learning about him, but recently, she couldn't help but notice she felt something for him. She loved just the sight of him and the sound of his voice, seeing him working with Twilight or uses his dragon breath. Suffice to say she had a bit of a crush on him. It felt odd to her, considering her fear of full grown dragons. Even so, even after seeing Spike turn into the beast that destroyed Ponyville, she didn't see a monster. She only saw the sweetest little guy in Ponyville. Spike walked past her, not noticing her, walking with what he thought was a confident stride but looked more like a waddle. Fluttershy couldn't help but giggle at his antics
FLUTTERSHY:(thinking) He's so adorable.
She quickly trotted beside him.
FLUTTERSHY: Hello Spike.
Spike quickly turned to see Fluttershy smiling at him.
SPIKE: Oh, hi Fluttershy. What are you doing here?
FLUTTERSHY: Just picking up a few things. What are you up to? You look very handsome.
SPIKE: Well, I'm off to see Rarity, the best mare in Ponyville, and take her out for the night.  
FLUTTERSHY: Oh...well, um...what did you have planned.
Spike then stopped and turned to face her, his face full of hope.
SPIKE: Well, first we'll have dinner at Crystal Colt restaurant, have some music and a bit of dancing, then we'll see that new romance play at the theatre, then we'll headout to the lake, under the moonlight, and then finally, we'll have our fist kiss.
Spike looked like he was in heaven as he finished and Fluttershy couldn't help but blush and smile hearing his plans. She would have been ecstatic to have an evening like that with Spike. It would be like a fairytale come true for her. But she knew he only had eyes for Rarity, which deeply saddened her. But she would still be supportive to him, because she could still be a friend.
FLUTTERSHY: Well...she's very lucky to have such a handsome young admirer.
SPIKE: No,no....I'm the lucky one. Well, bye Fluttershy, I have to get going before I'm too late.
Spike rushed off, Fluttershy waved to him but couldn't help but worry for him. She was very good friends with Rarity and she often said she wasn't sure she could feel for Spike like he did. But she believed it was just a simple crush and he would outgrow it eventually. Fluttershy wasn't so  sure. She could see Spike was taking this very seriously and more than likely was setting himself up to get hurt.
FLUTTERSHY: Oh, I really shouldn't, but....I need to make sure he's okay.
She quickly set off after Spike, hoping to stay out of sight but stay close enough to help if need be.
Ponyville-Rarity's boutique-evening
Spike was at Rarity's front door, doing one last check of himself and a bouquet of flowers he picked up along the way. From a distance, Fluttershy watched him, partly hoping that his evening would go as he foresaw, but partly wanting to run up to Spike and tell him how she felt. Inside, Rarity was hard at work on a lovely gown, looking somewhat flustered and tired.
RARITY: Just need to get the seem just right, make sure it threads perfectly.
She finished her work and set the dress on a mannequin looking quite satisfied.
RARITY: Yes, another success Rarity! Now onto the next-
She is cutoff as her doorbell rings.
RARITY: Who could that be at this hour?
She quickly walked to her door and opened it to see Spike looking very hopeful and smitten.
RARITY: Spike! What a pleasant surprise! What brings you here?
Spike was lost in his thoughts for just a moment as he admired her. Even disheveled from her work, she was beyond stunning.
SPIKE: Well, I was wondering if you would be interested in a little night out. Some dinner,  dancing, maybe a nice walk by the lake?
Spike made a bow to her and didn't notice Rarity looked a bit conflicted. She still had work to do and she was in no shape for a night out and she didn't like stringing Spike along like this, but on another hand, he had obviously gone to a lot of work to make himself up for her and obviously very much wanted her company.
RARITY: Well...Spike, I-
She stopped for a moment as she noticed Fluttershy watching from a distance and had an idea.
RARITY: Darling, I'm so sorry, but I've got so much work to do I really don't have the time.
Spike heard this and couldn't help but droop a bit in sadness, but Rarity gently lifted his friend.
RARITY: But please don't let me ruin you're evening. There are still plenty of ladies who would love an evening out with you.
SPIKE: Well....
Spike felt a bit torn by this, not wanting to spend the night with anyone else, but Rarity gazed at Him with a puppy dog look.
RARITY: Please Spikey-Wikey? For me?
She fluttered her eyes at him and he finally sighed.
SPIKE: Okay Rarity, for you, I'll find someone else for the night.
She gave him a little hug and patted him on the head.
RARITY: Have fun.
She slowly closed her door, winking once at Fluttershy in the distance. Fluttershy had watched in anticipation, and now felt an amount of joy.
FLUTTERSHY: Thank you Rarity.
Spike was slowly walking away from Rarity's shop looking downtrodden.
SPIKE: That could have gone better...
FLUTTERSHY: Um...Spike?
Spike jumped slighty hearing Fluttershy's voice and saw her smiling warmly at him.
SPIKE: What are you doing here?
FLUTTERSHY: Oh just,um...passing by....
Spike eyed her suspiciously, and she spoke up again.
FLUTTERSHY: So um...how.....how did it go with Rarity?
SPIKE: It didn't...Rarity's got a lot of work she needs to finish right now.
Fluttershy could see him becoming depressed and gently hug him with her wing.
FLUTTERSHY: Well, if you'd like, maybe....um, I could, possibly treat you out. I know the Cakes have some emeralds they could bake into a meal for you.
Spike looked at her thinking it over for a few moments. Fluttershy was inwardly hoping he would say yes. Finally Spike decided he had promised Rarity to enjoy the evening.
SPIKE: Okay, Fluttershy, let's go.
Fluttershy smiled wide and inwardly squealed with delight and the two set off for Sugarcube corner.
Ponyville-Sugarcube corner-late evening
Spike and Fluttershy were sitting at a table having a simple chat when Pinkie Pie dashed in.
PP:Hey guys! What are you doing here! OOh! Spike! You're all dressed up so nice! What's the occasion. (gasp) Are you two dating! Ohmygosh! Ohmygosh! That's so awesome! How about I get some candles and some music and-
Spike silenced her by placing a claw over her mouth.
SPIKE: Pinkie, it's not really a date. We're just having a night out together is all.
Pinkie nodded but Fluttershy looked down at his comment.
PINKIE: Well, we have those emerald cupcakes you like Spike! Want some!
SPIKE: Absolutely! What about you fluttershy?
FLUTTERSHY: Some Peppermint cookies, please.
PINKIE: Coming right up!
Pinkie dashed away leaving them alone.
SPIKE: I swear, one day I'll figure out how she works.
Fluttershy couldn't help but laugh at his comment and he glare lightheartedly at her.
SPIKE: So, Fluttershy, since you live so close to the forest, do you ever have to deal with big nasty animals, like Timberwolves.
FLUTTERSHY: No, thank heavens, I found a few different ways to keep those kinds of creatures away. Sometimes Twilight even uses her magic to help me. She says it gives her a chance to try out new spells she learns.
SPIKE: That's-
Spike was interrupted by Mr. Cakes giving him a friendly nudge.
MR. CAKES: Well, you're certainly getting lucky with the ladies, eh kiddo?
Spike blushed lightly at this and Fluttershy smiled.
MR. CAKES: Certainly went the extra mile, dressing up nice and all. Good luck!
He gave Spike a pat on the back and left them. Spike looked a little awkward but Fluttershy seemed quite happy. Half a second later, Pinkie returned with their food.
PP: Here you go! Right out of the oven!
Spike looked at the cupcakes, smaller than one he recieved on his birthday but still with plenty of the tasty gems, and felt his mouth water.
PP: So, why are you here Spike? I thought you would try to take out Rarity?
SPIKE: (annoyed) Well, I did...but she had too much work to do, and Fluttershy offered to treat me here.
FLUTTERSHY: Well...I couldn't let such a handsome and charming gentlecolt go to waste.
Spike and Pinkie both looked surprised at this and Fluttershy blushed firecly but smiled. Pinkie Pie seemed to realize it and left them be giggling a bit. Spike proceeded to eat his cupcakes to try and avoid the awkward feelings he had. Why was Fluttershy so flirty with him, and for that matter, why was he so taken aback by it? His heart belonged to Rarity, it always had. Then again, he had never really looked at another pony, but he didn't think he needed to. Rarity was so much more beautiful than any other pony. Spike tried to push these thoughts out of his mind as he finished his cupcakes feeling very satisfied.
SPIKE: Mmmm, that was great, I-
Spike then noticed a clock said 10:30pm.
SPIKE: Oh no! My curfew! Twilight's gonna kill me!
Spike started to run but Fluttershy stopped him.
FLUTTERSHY: Don't worry Spike. I'll bring you home and explain to Twilight.
SPIKE: You will? Oh thank you!
Spike gave her a big hug which she happily accepted. She placed him on her back and flew off for the library.
Ponyvile-Twilight's library-night
Twilight was tapping her hoof angrily as she looked at the clock.
TS: I told him not to be out late! Where in equestria is he?
Her front door opened and Twilight was about to shout but she saw Fluttershy carrying Spike and felt confused.
TS: Fluttershy? Wha-....Where's Rarity?
FLUTTERSHY: Hello Twilight. I'm so sorry for Spike being late, but Rarity couldn't join him tonight so I offered him a treat at Sugarcube corner. We lost track of time.
Twilight eyed them both as Spike looked on nervously. Finally she sighed in resignment.
TS: You're off the hook just this once Spike! You do this again I'll have you dust the library with a Robin's feather.
Spike sighed in relief and stepped to the floor.
SPIKE: Thank you for the night out Fluttershy.
FLUTTERSHY: My pleasure Spike.
Spike held out his hand for a shake but Fluttershy surprised him and Twilight by giving him a kiss on the cheek, turning quickly and flying away giggling. Spike looked a little confused as he touched his cheek and Twilight looked amused.
TS: Are you two?....
SPIKE: No, er, I don't know....
Spike looked embarassed and blushed as he fiddled with his hands and Twilight laughed lightheartedly.
TS: C'mon Spike. Time for bed.
Spike followed Twilight upstairs, both entering their beds, though Spike had trouble sleeping for he still had a thought in his mind.
SPIKE: Does she really like me?
End part 1
I think it goes without saying I'm a brony. I had been wanting to do something like this for a while but never really had anything to inspire me until I saw Flutterspike pairings, which I do like.
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